Author: lily97000
This is a shit review and is going to be harsh. So buckle up.
I seriously contemplated not doing this one, but whatever, I'm committed.
Plot or Cover/Blurb:
The cover is fine. It has the same look as literally every wattpad romance book so it is what it is I guess. I do hate the font and how Sake blends into the background but you can still read it so whatever.
There is a lot going on in your blurb and to be honest I didn't read it all. There are so many grammar issues in it, that it made it really hard for me to read through so I gave up. Grammar mistakes are a horrible thing to have in your blurb because then it spoils what is inside the book. So now I'm a little apprehensive about what I am going to read...
2/5
Grammar:
I'm reading the prologue right now and the grammar is bad, like really bad. There are so many issues everywhere and the writing doesn't flow in the slightest.
The very bad grammar isn't just in the prologue...everything is heavily doused in it...
The whole book needs edited, a lot. For me the grammar issues make it practically unreadable.
0/5
Descriptions:
I didn't read a lot of descriptions, but from what I did read yours are kind of basic? There isn't much to them and they don't give a whole lot to the book. But at least you have them. Even if they aren't fun to read.
2/5
Characters:
Oh lordy.
So, these characters do have some personality to them, but there isn't anything that really makes them unique in my eyes. They are all the same character that appear in wattpad books and real life romance books. So just ehh, there isn't anything about them that really makes me excited or want to read.
3/5
What I Hated/Thoughts:
First things first, do not have so much clutter in a chapter that is supposed to have writing, and especially not at the top. I understand what you're saying and how you only want people to start from a certain point because that is better once you get there. But, do not have that long ass disclaimer before the prologue. I was wondering if there was even going to be a prologue because you have so much writing before hand. That is something you should put in a separate chapter, not along with the prologue. I also, do not understand why these earlier chapter exist if you are saying that "You need to read starting FIVE chapters to get a better introduction of characters!" That really confuses me because you make it sound like what I'm about to read isn't worth it? Which really isn't the impression that you want to leave someone with before then even begin to read your book.
The prologue has no flow to it at all. There isn't anything enjoyable about reading it...
I'm going to do something that I would rather not do and skip ahead to where you told me to read because this is too painful to read.
I skimmed through a couple chapters all over the place to try and get a good enough sampling, but I really just can't do it.
There are a lot of cliches that I saw and things like the 10 minutes later, that was in the prologue.
I'm just not a fan of this.
1/5
Overall:
This needs work, and a lot of it. I don't have the patience or the will to push through the grammar, so that's it.
Final Score:
8/25
