Author: AuroraEScott
Plot:
The plot doesn't come across as blatantly unique. I feel like it might follow some common tropes and cliches, but maybe not, I'm on the fence about it. I want to think that it doesn't because I have faith in this book but, we'll see. Other than that though I feel like it is moving at a decent pace, which is a good thing.
3/5
Grammar:
I didn't notice anything, at least I don't think so. To be honest though I wasn't pay super close attention, which is a good thing. I was too busy reading the story.
5/5
Descriptions:
You had a decent amount of descriptions and they weren't anything that blew my mind or really knocked my socks off. But, they also weren't bad and I felt like you had enough to keep me satisfied. I don't know, they didn't disrupt my reading or make me annoyed so, you're set.
4/5
Characters:
YAS BITCH!!!!! You have the character part down. The main character is so vibrant and filled with life, I really appreciate it. Her character reads as if she is a real person, and I really enjoyed her and her perspective. Even the annoying one night stand guy had personality, which was great!
5/5
What I Hated:
You had me at waking up with getting her ass hit, but then you lost me when you never really followed up on it. I mean she goes on for a long time and doesn't really question it at all or tie it into anything until the man grabs her ass. I don't know just the lack of connections made the beginning fall flat.
"His deep voice rumbled in a rough morning voice" too many voices, choose what you want or reword it.
"rolled out of the his bed" make it the bed, and toss out his
Wait creatures???? What the heck is this lady talking about??? And he has fangs? Is he a vampire then? (I'm not taking points off for this, I'm just confused af).
Watch out for repetition, I saw it a few times and it was mildly irritating. They're easy finds and fixes, so they won't be too hard to take care of when you edit.
3/5
Overall:
I liked this book a lot more than I thought I would. There's just something about it that really made me want to read more (which I'm going to). Honestly, this isn't the kind of book that I would seek out and read on my own. With that said, I like it so that doesn't really matter and I hope it doesn't disappoint me.
Final Score:
20/25
