Author: MidnightSky987
Plot:
Cats. This is an insane story about cats and I freaking love it. This is breathtakingly unique and also kind of funny, though I don't know if you mean for it to be. Either way this is amazing and well written, and honestly I don't care what happens other then the fact that...THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have cats with insane powers, you have cats with no powers, you have fighting cats, you have dying cats, and you have a fantasy world. What isn't there to like?
5/5
Grammar:
There are a couple of little, little mistakes that pop up but they're little typos that aren't the end of the world. Other then that I didn't see anything that was glaringly obvious.
4/5
Descriptions:
Your descriptions aren't perfect, however, you have a perfect amount of them and do them in a way that draws my attention and keeps it, which I love. You also work them seamlessly into your story which is something that a lot of people have a hard time doing.
4/5
Characters:
These cats have more personality then some human characters I've seen lately. So yes, good for you, you're amazing.
I could've been a bit distracted by how much I love the story, but your characters seemed vivid and there was enough personality coming out for me, especially in a prologue, so yay!
4/5
Other Things I Hate:
"It was a horrid night in the planet of Gardinia."
I feel like this would sound a lot better if you changed in to on.
Indentation. It's good other places, but on wattpad it looks horrible and is rather annoying.
Some of the dialogue is laughably cheesy, you might want to work on that. As it detracts from everything else in the story.
3/5
Overall:
I LOVE THIS!!!!!! I love this so freaking much, I want this to be published and in my hands as a beautiful hard copy with a beautiful cat on it. When I first saw this book my initial though was that it was one of those Clan books, I don't remember the titles, but it's a whole series about lots of cats and they have clans and stuff like that. Anyways, I thought it was going to be a trashy version of that. But, what a surprise.
This truly is a good book, and I hope that it continues being great beyond the prologue and into the rest of it. And if it doesn't I'll come find you and bring one of the Superior cats with me.
:)
But seriously I love this book so much!
Final Score:
20/25
