Author: BlueberriesFromTay
Plot:
I love the concept you have here with the seven sins and then making them into people and it's just great. It also isn't something that many people can pull off but you really do. I just want to read more of it, so if you could update that would be great.
Thanks.
5/5
Grammar:
I don't know, I wasn't paying attention, nor did I care. I was too busy reading and enjoying your book.
Duh.
5/5
Descriptions:
Ugh. I love them, like everything else, you paint wonderful pictures and you don't go too crazy and you also don't keep too much to yourself either.
Ugh.
5/5
Characters:
DON'T EVEN GET ME FUCKING STARTED
THIS IS WHAT I CALL CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND SHOWING PIECES OF THE CHARACTERS AND LETTING THEIR ACTIONS SHOW YOU WHO THEY ARE AND LETTING THE READER MAKE THE ASSUMPTIONS THAT THEY NEED.
These are the BEST characters that I have read in a long time and I love all of them. You write them so well that they are all interesting and it isn't boring or confusing that you have so many POV's.
Congrats.
5/5
What I Hated/Thoughts:
I usually don't comment on covers because I understand that they're difficult and mine are shit. BUT oh my god I hate your cover so much, it just seems weird and it looks like a CGI which freaks me out too. Like when I'm looking at it I expect the chess pieces to start moving around. AND your other covers are super good, so I feel like you should try and do better for this one. You don't have to change it though, just a super strong suggestion.
Oh
My
Fucking
God
I Love
THIS SOOOOO MUCH
Seriously, I don't have anything bad to say and I read all of the chapters before getting to this. Ugh.
I love it.
5/5
Overall:
Bitch don't even read this honestly, all I'm doing is spitting out non-sense and stoking your ego. I loved this book, I think that much is very clear and that is all that matters. I think that you really need to get on updating so that I can read more of it. Like right now. Actually, better yet finish it.
Final Score:
25/25
*confetti*
Congrats!!! You are the second one to ever get a perfect score!!! So yay!! I love it though and seriously more people need to read it.
