Sexy Jordan

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Author: NightmareWritezZx

Seems how this story isn't in normal novel format, and is instead in the form of text messages I'm just going to spit out my opinions and give you a score at the end depending on what I think you deserve. 


I understand that these are texts but there is something that seems really weird about them. Besides the spelling mistakes, they don't seem like things that normal people would text to each other. This only goes for some of the texts as others feel perfectly normal and not forced in the slightest. I stopped at chapter 9 and really I don't know. It could be that this format just isn't for me, or that I'm incapable of being overly sappy but I find those two annoying. There's just something about them, even through text that is just meh too me. But, other people probably eat it up. *shrugs*

Rating: 5/10

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