Author: sandydragon1
Plot:
Oh. My. God.
YESS
I'M GOING TO WRITE EVERYTHING IN CAPS BECAUSE OF HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS. FIRST OFF CAN WE GET A HELL YEAH FOR BEING UNIQUE AS FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AMAZING, YOUR PLOT MOVES WONDERFULLY AND UGH, I NEED TO FINISH THIS SO I CAN GO READ MORE. YOU ARE A WIZARD AND I APPRECIATE THE WAY THIS STORY BEGINS. I THINK YOU HAVE MADE A GOOD USE OF A PROLOGUE, AND REALLY PUT YOUR ALL INTO IT. WHICH HELL YES!!!!! I LOVE THE IDEA OF THIS BOOK SO MUCH, YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND.
5/5
Grammar:
IS GRAMMAR EVEN A THING THAT MATTERS ANYMORE? HONESTLY, I WAS TOO DISTRACTED TO PAY ANY ATTENTION TO IT. I JUST WANT TO READ MORE OKAY?????
5/5
Descriptions:
*DREAMY SIGH*
UGH. I'M SICK OF CAPS NOW.
This is amazing, you have the perfect mix of dialogue and story telling and making it seem real. I mean doesn't everyone have a little boy that is a bear. Which reminds me of how much I want to read more...
5/5
Characters:
Yes. Yes. YES.
I love the characters, they have personality, and life and everything that they need in life. Seriously. They're realistic. And. Everything that I want when I read a story.
5/5
What I Hated:
I don't know how I feel about how the rangers reacted to the bear. The way it's described I pictured them like super scared children that don't know how to do their job. Which, obviously is an issue in the scheme of things.
But, I'm not taking points off, because honestly it could be just how I read it, and not every ranger is going to be perfect. *shrugs*
5/5
Overall:
Is this relevant? I love this book and your writing. I think it has to be my favorite ever on wattpad. Also, you're the first ever that I'm giving a perfect score to, so take it and cherish it for life. I'm ruthless and would have been happier to give you a shit review. But, your story is amazing so I can't.
Final Score:
25/25
CONGRATS NOW IM GOING TO GO READ YOUR STORY MORE BYYYEEEEEE
