Author: SeaSpree
Plot:
The plot is interesting but I'm not invested in it. This plays into the character and other things, but the plot alone just isn't doing it for me. It is just too similar to most fantasy type novels that I have read. There comes a point where you need something else to really grab your attention with fantasy plots that are commonly used.
2/5
Grammar:
It was fine. There were mistakes, but none that were life or death.
3/5
Description:
You are a very descriptive writer which I appreciate, but there are places where the descriptions feel super blocky in how they are worded. You need to be careful of this, and look over your work, as it's a super easy fix.
3/5
Characters:
Ehh. I don't know that character isn't one that strikes me as very interesting. She is, yet again, too similar to common characters you find in fantasy novels. There isn't anything about her that really catches my attention or makes me care about what is happening to her.
2/5
What I Hated:
"The docks were a mess; that had been the first thing she'd noticed when she'd arrived."
This whole sentence doesn't seem to have any use at all. As from there you dive into talking about the rest of the town, so why does the docks and that fact that they were the first thing she noticed matter?
Your sentence structure is kind of weird? It doesn't flow, but it isn't super blocky. I don't know, it just kind of puts me off a little, but I don't have a real explanation for it, it's just weird.
3/5
Overall:
This book is fine. Less picky people probably really like, or ones that are just there for an easy book to read and nothing else. Which is perfectly fine.
Final Score:
13/25
