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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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● COVER : 10/10
I love the cover. I think it goes perfectly with the plot.
● TITLE : 8/10
I think the title is ok for the story as it goes well with it. It’s not unique, and I have seen a lot of stories with the same title, but it’s really hard to come up with a unique title’s now a day so you did a great job.
● BLURB : 8/10
The blurb is short, and many people might just skip over your story and continue to look. It is very intriguing so you just have to add a bit more.
● PLOT : 10/15
The plot is very well developed for having 7 chapters, so you did an impressive job there.
● CREATIVITY : 5/10
Although you took the story brave and star wars and made it your own. With a lot of uniqueness. The first 4 chapters felt like reading a book for the story brave with just a unique spin to it.
● CHARACTERS : 10 /10
The characters were yours and nicely developed. It was easy to remember them and know which one was which.
● GRAMMAR : 15 /15
Grammar and vocabulary were on point and perfectly done.
● COMMUNICATION : 3/5
In the first three chapters you answer every single comment, then stop. Following with your readers creates relationships and friendships and gets the readers to come back.
● OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15 I love your story. I always wanted to take brave and change some things and yours is perfect. I love reading every single chapter and will definitely continue to read to see where the story will lead and ends.
• TOTAL : 84/100
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