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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 9/10
The cover goes well with the story. The author has surely worked hard with the cover. But it isn't captivating, plus the watermark of the app takes it all away. On a wider spectrum, it's still amazing.
• TITLE : 7/10
The title is very simple and kinda long. Also, this isn't the only story with this title. There are more stories with title similar to this one. The title could have been better.
• BLURB : 8/10
Description is well explained. It gives enough amount of information for the readers to decide if they want to dive in. But there are punctuation mistakes, grammatical errors.
• CREATIVITY : 7/10
The author has used Shayaris, which in a way is creative. In the beginning, both the protagonists' have their own introductory chapters. There are minor sentence framing mistakes which eventually distracts the readers.
• PLOT : 11/15
The plot is common and predictable, but you never know. Since the story has just begun, it's difficult to pin point the problems they're gonna face.
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
As mentioned before, the story has just started, so character development is out of question. Nevertheless, the author has offered background story of both the lead characters.
• GRAMMAR : 10/15
The author has made many grammatical mistakes including major punctuation errors, extra unwanted spacing and dots, tense errors.
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
Shayaris/quotes served the purpose of communication. Even the author has made sure that whatever she is trying to convey, it successfully reaches the reader.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15
The story is sweet. It has factors that makes me want to read it further, and I will definitely. I can see myself waiting for updates. But it's highly predictable and kinda cliché (for those who read books from Indian authors) and the scenes are repetitive with respect to other stories.
• TOTAL : 75/100
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