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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 8/10
Simply amazing cover. The author hasn't put much into it, but the title on the cover does all the work here.
• TITLE : 9/10
The title gives away a mysterious vibe which is really not the case. It succeeds in grabbing attention of the one seeing it.
• BLURB : 9/10
The description begins with great enthusiasm, but as it progresses, it seems like the author lost interest. It looks incomplete. Anyways, it's great though.
• CREATIVITY : 7/10
The story transitions smoothly, but I wish the author would have used some pictures or something along with the story for readers.
• PLOT : 12/15
The plot is impressive. There aren't a lot of stories with similar plot. Though the author has made sure to make the story as original as she can, and it shows.
• CHARACTERS : 7/10
Characters are well written, they are relatable in some cases. There are some things that are typical which adds loop hole to the story.
• GRAMMAR : 8/15
Many punctuation mistakes, each sentence has missing comas, unwanted spacing, many more such mistakes.
• COMMUNICATION : 3/5
Even though the story a bit reaches the readers due to the way the author has executed her work, the communication is some what missing.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
This is one of the stories I genuinely wanted to read and would enjoy reading anytime. I would suggest editing, and the story will be ready to shine.
• TOTAL : 75/100
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