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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 10/10
The cover is amazing and perfect reflect the story. I love it.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
Just by reading the titel, it difficult to understand, what's the story is about but, after reading the story I realized that the titel goes perfect with the story.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
The blurb is really very interesting. It's perfect lengthy and it's can drive readers attractions towards the story without any doubt.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 10/10
Story was really creative and interesting as I say before. The way author start her story that was really amusing. And the way Rachel start digging truth it was just amazing. Author you are really creative without doubt.
⚫ PLOT : 13/15
Story plots are well arranged, every plots have surprises which make the story more interesting but, some scenarios need more information and description.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 9/10
Main characters are described well but, side characters need more information.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 15/15
I didn't found any grammatical mistakes. Also author use good vocabulary.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 2/5
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⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
Story is getting interesting as the time passing. I enjoyed reading the story very much. But, in some points I felt, if you add some more description it will be better. Example : for describing Rachel's feeling, you can add more emotions in descriptions. It will help the readers to feel connect with all characters.
⚫ TOTAL : 92/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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