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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 8/10
It is a good cover but it doesn't really tell about the girl, If the picture would be of a girl instead of JIMIN, then it would be more appropriate.
• TITLE : 9/10
The title fits the story and is a nice pick also.
• BLURB : 7.5/10
Its good and interesting but it is somewhat confusing in some parts, Mention of girl's life more freely will be better I feel. But even if you don't make changes it is attractive enough.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
It was creative, very creative and i loved it. The first chapter to Haru to Cotton candy. Everything was new and unique. Good work in creativity.
• PLOT :14/15
The plot was also really really good. I especially loved the 2nd chapter where in the end Jimin says, " We're not three, We are seven"
That was hilarious. And the death of her friend was very emotional indeed.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
I enjoyed all the characters. The girl's sarcastic part was especially funny. And Jimin was really cool. Namjoon was a mixture of sarcastic and serious guy, others were awesome too.
• GRAMMAR : 12/15
No spelling errors but tense and punctuation. Very minute so no need to worry a lot about it. Many may overlook like me, but I was reviewing so I had to keep in mind.
• COMMUNICATION : 4.5/5
I would give you good ranking here. You do reply back and engage with them but no to every comment. But yet it's fine!
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
I love your story so far.I am impressed by your development and pace of going and good description. It was really fun reading the story.
• TOTAL : 89/100
Feel free to Pm or comments if any queries,
Thank you,
Rishika
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