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🔖 Mates Between Marriage

Author : lifeisastoryliveit

Reviewer : goldenroselover

• COVER : 9/10

The fonts are perfect! I love the picture chosen it definitely fits the story and genre. Although your username could be bigger I could hardly see it. Same with the subtitle below I didn't notice it until I took a good look at the cover. Those few things could be changed.

• TITLE : 10/10

The title goes well with the story, it accurately tells us about the plot without giving to much away. The title also says something about the genre and what's happing in the book. The title was very well thought out.

• BLURB : 10/10

The first part of the blurb is the excerpt from the book and it makes readers hungry more wondering what's going to happen next. The second part of the blurb is telling about the story, which does it give away to much but just enough. The blurb successfully told me about the story.

• CREATIVITY : 7/10

The idea that one group were werewolves is a werewolf, vampire, and a witch is very creative with the story. I haven't read a lot of wolf story's talking about the main character not being able to bring out her inner wolf, and so far it's making the story interesting. The things around her were described really well. Some aspects of the story could get a little unoriginal for example Adrianna's character could be a little cliché.

• CHARACTERS : 6/10

Adrianna could be a little immature at times considering her age. For example, when Chris didn't pick up his phone she lashed out and hid herself in the bathroom. Adrianna could be unlikeable at times, however, she could be relatable sometimes. Chris was a sensible character that I got along with he acted normally and calmly. I think the story would benefit from describing how characters look. I didn't know what Adrianna looked like at all. The rest of the characters were likable. Dialogue between characters could've been more mature.

• PLOT : 13/15

The plot was interesting with werewolves potentially being vampires and witches. The plot at times could be unoriginal. Otherwise, the plot made me want to read more!

• GRAMMAR : 12/15

Some dialogue was missing quotation marks many times. I noticed one particular word had way to many 'y' this was the word: okayyyyyy. Sometimes there would be way to many exclamation points. There were italics when they weren't needed. Grammar could've been improved.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

Overall I really loved your story! The characters had great personalities. I knew everything that was happening! There were some grammar errors that could easily be fixed with some proofreading. I will definitely be awaiting your next updates!

• TOTAL : 82/100