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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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🌼 COVER: 8/10
Cover is beautiful. It expresses the protagonist very well. But it can be more improved.
🌼 TITLE: 9/10
Title is a subtle one. It's really confusing but it goes well with the story and blurb.
🌼 BLURB: 10/10
Since the theme of the story is from the 1800s, blurb is pretty strong. It shows the storng side of the protagonist.
🌼 CREATIVITY: 10/10
I've never read this type of story. Author of the story is very creative to write a story which has a 1800s vive. The story gives a clear view of that time, when parents would marry off their daughter to an old man, just because he offered them money.
🌼 PLOT: 12/15
There aren't many plots in this story yet, since it's not complete. But those that are present, is really good. Leaves a lot to wonder. And I expect the story have more beautiful plots in the future chapters.
🌼 CHARACTERS: 8/10
Characters are good. But needs more description.
🌼 GRAMMAR :15/15
No grammatical mistakes.
🌼 COMMUNICATION :0/5
There aren't any comments.
🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION :10/15
Story is good. It has a strong theme. But most scenes needed to be described more, as I felt it was rushed. Overall, it was pretty good.
🌼 TOTAL : 82/100
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