🔖 Riding Your Sin

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Author : AlliePrascsak

Reviewer : wwenqing

Reviewer : wwenqing

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🌼 COVER : 8/10

Cover is beautiful. It expresses the protagonist very well. But it can be more improved.

🌼 TITLE : 9/10

Title is a subtle one. It's really confusing but it goes well with the story and blurb.

🌼 BLURB : 10/10

Since the theme of the story is from the 1800s, blurb is pretty strong. It shows the storng side of the protagonist.

🌼 CREATIVITY : 10/10

I've never read this type of story. Author of the story is very creative to write a story which has a 1800s vive. The story gives a clear view of that time, when parents would marry off their daughter to an old man, just because he offered them money.

🌼 PLOT : 12/15

There aren't many plots in this story yet, since it's not complete. But those that are present, is really good. Leaves a lot to wonder. And I expect the story have more beautiful plots in the future chapters.

🌼 CHARACTERS : 8/10

Characters are good. But needs more description.

🌼 GRAMMAR : 15/15

No grammatical mistakes.

🌼 COMMUNICATION : 0/5

There aren't any comments.

🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 10/15

Story is good. It has a strong theme. But most scenes needed to be described more, as I felt it was rushed. Overall, it was pretty good.


🌼 TOTAL : 82/100

🌼 TOTAL : 82/100

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