🔖 Esoteric Beacon

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Author : yaris052018

Reviewer : milly_ellins

Reviewer : milly_ellins

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COVER : 9/10

TITLE : 7/10

BLURB : 9/10

CREATIVITY : 10/10

PLOT : 9/10

CHARACTERS : 9/10

GRAMMAR : 8/10

COMMUNICATION : 5/5
(With Readers)

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

TOTAL: 78/100

REVIEW :

The title is a bit hard to understand because of all the symbols and numbers, so maybe consider changing that to make it clearer for potential readers. The graphics on the cover are amazing and I like the different fonts. The blurb is long, although does draw the reader in, which is exactly what a blurb is meant to do, just maybe think about condensing it slightly. The creativity and originality of the story is outstanding, and the plot and characters are both very imaginative. Your communication with readers is also good. Overall, it's a great story with a good plot and characters, so well done!

 Overall, it's a great story with a good plot and characters, so well done!

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