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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 9/10
The cover is nice and eye-catching. It gives an insight of the story. Choice of fonts is very good.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title is unique and matches the plot of the story. It's catchy and short as well. Good job!
• BLURB : 6/10
The blurb is short. It doesn't excite people to read the story. Although it's to the point which I appreciate, but you should write in a more creative way rather in plain sentences.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
I like the way you have perfectly written it from a second-person's point of view. You have shown the emotions of the protagonist very well and also there are twists at the right time.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
Protagonist's character is intriguing. You have done a good job in expressing her emotions very well, like how she feels when Jessa got concert tickets, or when she was in concert hall, her excitement to see the first live show of BTS. So far the protagonist's character is very well developed. The bonding between the protagonist and Jesse as best friends is also good.
• PLOT : 13/15
The pace of the story is good from the start with the turns and twist at the perfect time. You have so far worked very well with the story to make it feel real, whether it is to describe the feelings of a fan or the conversation between Jessa and the protagonist in the 5th chapter. After the twist in the story, it creates suspense in the story and readers are intrigued to think what will happen next.
• GRAMMAR : 13/15
There are some sentences which cover the whole paragraph. Try to make small sentences. Also the length of some chapters is small which breaks the flow, so work on it. Otherwise, I loved the way you describe, I can actually picture everything.
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
There are not many comments, but you answered all comments in a polite way and your comments have this sort of warmth in it.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
I loved your writing style. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters. Work on your blurb. Thanks for recommending this book to me.
• TOTAL : 89/100
Good job!
Ps- If you have questions, feel free to pm me.
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