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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 7/10
The cover is good but looks more like fan art than book cover. But it surely attracts so let it be.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title is perfect and by what i understood matches perfectly to the story. It's kinda a synonym of what I understood the story is about!
• BLURB : 6/10
It was good but very short and not much informative about the story genre.. A bit more points can be made. Maybe by introducing the main characters in 3 points each.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
Your story was creative. It had good attracting points and was unique. Good job here. You had good vocabulary too.
• PLOT : 12/15
The plot sounded interesting in prologue but it kinda deteriorated as the story went by.. It became a bit confusing in POV's like in your chapter two, it's not written whose Pov that was in the starting of the chapter. Though I understood later but got confused. As the first chapter ended with jimin chasing his sister and next was taehyung running to the bus stop. and i was thinking how did jimin's sister get to the bus stop? She was cooking pancakes! So, you can edit that.
• CHARACTERS : 6/10
The characters were strong but lacked in introduction of their qualities and appearance.
• GRAMMAR : 15/15
No mistakes found. Great job!
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Good work here by being polite and replying and engaging with your readers.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
The story was great. Keep in mind the pointed out errors and everything will be fine. If any queries leave a comment above or PM me.
Thanks!
• TOTAL : 82/100
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