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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 6/10
The cover is absolutely beautiful but it doesn't really match with the story. I know picking/designing a cover about your story is kinda difficult but the cover can be made better.
• TITLE : 8/10
The title is bold enough to attract. I really liked it. Most people will wonder what the story might be about and might want to look into it so great job!
• BLURB : 4/10
It is interesting and all but is short, a bit more of detailing and enhancing will do.
• CREATIVITY : 8/10
Indeed it is creative. If fact, very creative. Something new and unique and absolutely loved reading it.
• PLOT : 13/15
The plot is good, But gets a bit messed up, like in the 2nd chapter, you give information on the murders that took place and then suddenly move to introding Toby, daana. if you could separate it in different chapters, it will be solved.
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
Good character sketch. and good mystery about WRITER X.
• GRAMMAR : 11/15
Very few mistakes, can be cleared if edited.
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
Great job! You were really sweet to your readers
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
Your writing skills are really good and the book is worth reading. The concept and idea is fabulous. Just a little here and there which I mentioned above and rest all is good to go. If any queries please do PM or comment above, thanks and stay safe.
• TOTAL : 75/100
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