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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 10/10
I really like your cover. It's perfectly suites with your story. You did a good job. I love your cover. It show us beautiful friendship, which your story contains.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
You did another good job with your story titel. It's perfectly reflect your story about friendship. Good Job.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
Your blurb is really interesting. You blurb was short but it's able to catch attention of everyone. I love it personally.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 7/10
The way you wrote your story, I find it really unique and creative. But I think, you should write some incident without dairy. Like, you can write some conversation between Blue and Naya or some other side characters. You can add feelings after an incident. It will be more interesting.
⚫ PLOT : 8/10
As much as I read, I find your plots were nice. There were 5 charters in your story. I hope as much you updated it will be more interesting. Keep it up. And try to write bigger chapter's.
⚫ CHARACTERS :7/10
Your characters were nice. But they need more information. And most importantly, while reading your story, I couldn't feel connected with your character's because, you didn't add their feelings or their conversation's with each other.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 12/15
The way you write your story is nice. But, try to use better vocabulary. It will be best. I suggest you to read some books, that will help you to improve your writing skills.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 1/5
There were only three comments in your story and, you replied only one.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 10/15
I find your story quiet interesting and unique. You are But, you have to improve some lack in your story, I mentioned earlier. I hope this review will help you to improve your story.
⚫ TOTAL : 75/100
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