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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
I'm absolutely in love with your cover. It's eye-catching and goes very well with the story.
• TITLE : 10/10
Title is really catchy and short, which makes it perfect to remember. It's intriguing, mysterious, exciting and meaningful. It reflects the idea of the story wonderfully, making it a perfect title.
• BLURB : 9.5/10
Blurb is to the point and attracts a reader like a moth to a flame. It's mysterious and makes the reader wonder what will happen. It has the right amount of details about characters and I loved the fact how you have connected the title to the blurb.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
I loved the way you introduced the characters. Their feelings are conveyed perfectly, be it their pain, loss or heartbreak. They are portrayed realistically and have their own flows.
• CREATIVITY : 8.5/10
The story is not like any cliché stories, where they meet again, forgive each other and then start dating again, and have a happy ending. No, the story shows a realistic approach. It shows their pain, their heartbreak and in the end, that wound like that can't be healed. But why I reduced your marks is because I believe that you have that potential to develop the story more gracefully.
• PLOT : 14/15
Plot is very interesting and different. Story is not at all rushed and it kept me on the edge till the end. Though it hurts at the end, it has a satisfying ending. You have done a good job with the plot.
• GRAMMAR : 13/15
I found some grammatical mistakes in the story. Also, some sentences are weirdly structured and unnecessary repetition which disrupt the flow of the story. Like: 1. "Don't even get me started." It all started with a... ' here "it all started" makes me think that you're going to tell us in detail than just one sentence.
2. 'Summer has started and it's been one week in Redwood,... I am one week closer to being back in London for college.', firstly this sentence is very long and repetition of one week make it a bit awkward. I would suggest you to proofread your story.
• COMMUNICATION : 3/5 (With Readers)
I noticed that you didn't answer most of the comments.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
I really enjoyed reading this story. In the end, the phrase 'Life is a Whirlwind' touched my heart. It's a type of book, I'd recommend my friends to read.
• TOTAL : 92/100
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