🔖 Until You

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Author : AJSonline

Reviewer : srabonyislam

Reviewer : srabonyislam

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COVER : 8/10

The cover is beautiful. But I think you can improve your cover. Your font can be changed. It's little hard to read.

TITLE : 10/10

The title perfectly suits your story. It is on point what your book about. I love it.

BLURB : 10/10

I really like your blurb. It's very interesting and totally justify to your story. It's perfect.

CREATIVITY : 9/10

Your story matches real life and, I find it really creative. But there is some tiny point you can improve. After that it will be perfect.

PLOT : 14/15

The plot was solid. And your story flowed well. But I think it can be more interesting.

CHARACTERS : 8/10

All characters are realistic. But there is lack of information about your character. I think if you add some more information about your character it will be amazing.

GRAMMAR : 15/15

Your grammar style is perfect. The way you use punctual mark's it was perfect. I found no errors in your story. Good vocabulary added another plus point in your story. It was perfect.

COMMUNICATION : 2/5

You didn't interact with your readers. Most of the comments was unanswered. You have to improve this. A good author interact with his/her readers.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

It's a good story. I find it realistic and interesting. Overall I love your story. Keep it up. I hope my review on your story will help you on your work to bring up full potential in your story.

TOTAL : 90/100

⚫ TOTAL : 90/100

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