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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 8/10
Its nice, but not enough attention grabbing. I would suggest a dark theme for the cover.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title is perfect for the book and is also pretty uncommon.
• BLURB : 9/10
The blurb perfectly matches with the story, but is too big, i would suggest you to add a few lines that will attract more readers.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
The book is very uncommon or so i found. It is really amazing.
• PLOT : 14/15
It's quite mysterious, it has suspense, fun and more! Nowhere close to cliché.
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
The female protagonist is pretty badass and the author has described her nicely but needs more work on other characters.
• GRAMMAR : 11/15
I found a few errors, and i must say those wont go unseen by the readers. Like there was line, where you were supposed to write 'She', whereas it was a 'He'. This sometimes confuses readers. So take care of that. Others were normal mistakes, you can edit those after finishing the book or whenever you want.
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
The author tried to reply back to all the comments, but a few were left.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
As i've mentioned earlier, the book is hella mysterious and unique.
Give it a read, you wont regret ❤
• TOTAL : 86/100
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