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🔖 Amanita : Chronicles Of Thalis

Author : marsaumell

Reviewer : belkisaris

• COVER : 5/10

The cover is ok as it is, but it might not bring potential readers. If I was scanning through Wattpad for a book to read I wouldn't have stopped for yours. If it weren't for me reading it to review it, I might be turned off by the cover. For a moment I thought it was a book about poetry.

• TITLE : 8/10

The title is unique and very fitting to the story. I like it.

• BLURB : 8/10

The blurb is ok as it is as well it tells the plot and might bring potential new readers to come to read the book. But to make it perfect, I would suggest reading your book and trying to think of what makes your story unique and interesting without telling you how you can draw people to your story to give it a chance. Because this is an amazing story and it needs to be read.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

Your story is very creative and is something that I haven't read before. I always think about the hunger games and wonder what brought the author to create such an amazing story, and it's been a long time since I thought like that. Don't get me wrong I have read a lot of amazing and creative stories but yours made me ask. What made you come up with such an amazing story? What were you watching that got you to write like this? You have gold here, and I wouldn't be surprised if I see your story as a movie on Netflix.

• PLOT : 15/15

I am obsessed with your plot; you have created an amazing plot. Just like I mention in creative I haven't seen another plot quite like yours and I am looking forward to reading more and seeing how the story ends, because usually I can predict but just
like with the hunger games I have no clue and I am intrigued.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

The characters, just like the plot, are very nicely developed. I could tell that this story wasn't something that you thought of and just posted, you thought long and hard about the characters and worked on them until they were this perfect. Grand job!

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

Grammar and description were on point. You did a skilled job. Professionally done.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

I was very impressed with the way you answer every comment, and when the same reader kept commenting over and over again you let the reader know not only you read each and every single one of them but that you appreciate them. Just promise me when you become a famous Author you're going to keep answering to comments and letting your readers know how much you appreciate them :)

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

You already know how much I love the story, but just like with the cover, title, and blurb there's just one more thing I think if it's fixed it would make the story perfect. I only read the first chapter and I am not sure how many words there are in the first chapter, but it took me over 30 minutes for the first chapter. That might be a turnoff for other readers. It is usually recommended in Wattpad that a chapter be 2,500 words to 3,000 I think your first chapter exceeded that. I would suggest maybe breaking the chapter into two or three to keep the chapters between 2,500 to 3,000 trust me people are still going to click next to continue reading.

• TOTAL : 89/100