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- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 7/10
Cover is very simple and basic. I liked how you weren't trying to impose graphics to create more crowd but it could have been more attractive.
• TITLE : 8/10
Title matches with the story so far. Since the book is still ongoing, yet I can decipher the change of Charlee's anchor from Woody to Storm.
• BLURB : 7/10
It is well written. I must say it was quite appropriate and did go with the title. As much as your blurb was interesting, it wasn't intriguing.
• CREATIVITY : 5/10
The storyline is nice but it is not well presented. The switching between the past and present had me confused. Most of the time I felt the past had no connection to the present situation. It would have been better if in a chapter, the present scenario had some connection with the past events to maintain the flow. But your chapters were like a river bifurcated into two new ones. The single day "May 3" was very eventful, it was like reading 5 chapters but still there's more to come.
• PLOT : 12/15
A lot is on the table. Ghosts, spirits, action, drama, tragedy ,and many more. So, I really liked it.
• CHARACTERS : 7/10
A good description for the main characters but I felt that supporting characters were sidelined. A few more lines about them would have done no harm.
• GRAMMAR : 10/15
Few grammatical mistakes were there like missing full stops, question marks, incorrect use of articles, long sentences. I still believe ghosts are more scary than any living being but you are calling Damen scary. Also stick to one adjective for him. I mean in a single chapter he went on from being grumpy to scary and finally settling on stormy.
• COMMUNICATION : 3/5
Communicated nicely with the readers.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15
I really found the storyline different and interesting. Keep writing and do invest sometime in editing.
• TOTAL : 70/100
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