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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 6/10
Just like I liked the previous Zanilla's cover, this is also good but it becomes too common in this case.
• TITLE : 9/10
The title is relevant and gives glimpses of story and at the same time it's mysterious also.
• BLURB : 7/10
The blurb is good, lengthy but gives away too much information. Just omit and edit a few lines. It will do.
• CREATIVITY : 7/10
It is good but not as creative as i expected after reading Zanilla. Well as it has only 3 chapters so, i might be wrong but yet look over it once again.
• PLOT : 13/15
The plot has started good and looks like it will flow good as well. I look forward to it.
• CHARACTERS : 7/10
I loved all the characters. They are all beautiful. Even though you have given an aesthetic, I prefer descriptions of characters more detailed too.
• GRAMMAR : 14/15
No as such of errors. So good work here!
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Good job! Here too. Continue like this you will be successful.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
The story is easy to remember and as much updated flows really good. The above mentioned corrections are the only ones to consider.
Thanks
• TOTAL : 81/100
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