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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 7/10
The cover is nice but, As the the story is about two person. I suggest you to change it and try to make it similar with the storyline.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
The titel is perfect. It's reflect the storyline well. Good job in choosing story title.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
The blurb given interestingly. It's made jump to the story. I love the blurb.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 9/10
Well, Author is really creative without any doubt. The story is really creative. The way author showcase two different person and their struggling life. I really find that creative. But, I think if author describe more all scenario it would have been better.
⚫ PLOT : 13/15
All plots were nice snd interesting also all plots were inspiring. But, I didn't it well arranged. Author, try to make it more well arranged and as, I say before trynto describe all scenarios more nicely.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 8/10
All characters were nice but, more information need about all characters. You can add a chapter for introducing all characters with all readers.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 10/15
Author's writting style was nice. But, I found few grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes. Which need to be correct. And also try to use better vocabulary.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 2/5
Author didn't reply in all comments.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
I enjoyed reading the story. It was really nice. Author represent two person and their own struggling life. It was really amazing. There were few errors I mentioned earlier, which need to be improve.
⚫ TOTAL : 81/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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