ᒪIᗷᖇᗩᖇY ᖇᗴᐯIᗴᗯՏ 2.0

🔖 Who Is Ivy Rose?

Author : photolover1

Reviewer : Aesthetically_Lazy

• COVER : 7/10 

I like the picture but increase the font size, please. I can see the title clearly but the sub-heading is a bit unclear. Even your name is smaller. So just increase the font size and you'll be fine :)

• TITLE : 10/10

Damn, I'm in love with the title! It is so mysterious and just by looking at the chapter, I got attracted to the story! It's awesome! Good job :D

• BLURB : 10/10 

Short and catchy are the only words I can use to describe it. I love how you have written it and you've got a mystery theme going on which I like. Good job with this one too! 

• CREATIVITY : 10/10 

I admire the way you write your chapters. Every scene is written with such precision and detail that I almost couldn't find any mistakes at all. The chapters are written well and the characters are also humane. 

• CHARACTERS : 9/10 

I love Carly's character so much. I can feel the emotions that she is feeling when you talk about her. You've built your characters well. I deducted a point because, in some instances, I felt like you were exaggerating her emotions, for example when Megan's death was revealed, I felt like her actions were a little exaggerated. Just show her emotions more. What exactly was she feeling when she was told the news. (That's also not much necessary but you can change that when you're editing). 

• PLOT : 15/15 

It's almost hard to take points from you because of how well-written this story is. Your plot was great and you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Honestly, I did not find any mistakes here.

• GRAMMAR : 14/15 

Just a few typos here and there. Also, you change your tense a lot. For example, you have changed your tense from present to past tense a lot in the prolepsis. So, just take care of that when you edit the book. 

• COMMUNICATION :  4/5 

You've replied to most of the people in your comments and also wrote wonderful authors' notes. But try to reply to all of them if that's possible because they kind of support you with the story and stuff. 

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15 

At first glance, I did think the story would be fun to read but I was also hesitant because of the cover. So without judging the book by its cover, I read the whole story and boy was it good. Seriously, I loved this book. You've done a great job writing this one and your efforts can be seen. Maybe you can change the cover because I don't have any other advice XD

• TOTAL : 93/100

Great job! You can pm me if you have any questions :) 

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