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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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1) Cover : 8/10
Yep i really liked the cover, it seemed spooky just as the author wanted to show.
2) Tittle : 7/10
Actually a walking girl sounds like a zombie. The story is about an evil spirit, so it would be nice if you change the name or just simply change the word walking.
3) Blurb : 7/10
Well the blurb kinda matched with the story but not entirely. The author needs work more harder.
4) Creativity : 7/10
Demonic possession stories are pretty common, but i loved the way the author tried to describe the horror.
5) Plot : 8/15
It was somewhere between cliche and not so cliche.
6) Characters : 9/10
It was a short horror story, so i liked the way the author only kept the necessary characters.
7) Grammar : 5/15
I loved the way the author wanted to present the story, but the story has too much grammatical errors, at some points i couldnt even understand who is who or what the character is trying to say. Also, when you write a direct speech you must have to use inverted comma, it was pretty hard to understand which line was a direct speech and which wasnt. I would suggest the author to work on her grammar real hard, she has the potential to write something amazing.
8) Communications with the readers : 1/5
A very few comments throughout the book, but no replies from the author.
9) Overall Impression : 7/15
The author could've write it real better, and i love the way she left a suspense in the end, that was unexpected. Please do focus on your grammar, thats working as an obstacle here. Best of luck!
*total - 59/100
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