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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
The cover is too simple yet it attracted me! I loved it. These covers do suit historical stories and I absolutely love it. But about this I can't assure about other readers.
• TITLE : 7/10
The title is very relevant and readers may get gist of the plot. Being a historical story a pinch mystery will be better.
• BLURB : 9/10
It's good, it sums up all the necessary details required and it's lengthy enough.
• CREATIVITY : 7/10
You are creative no doubt in that. But you can summarise some chinese words with english meaning at the end of the chapter instead of in the end as glossary, or shift the glossary after the characters chapter.
• PLOT : 12/15
I love the plot and event flow in a good pace but it's kinda predictable. A bit of surprise, mystery will make the plot yet more interesting and readers will get hooked to it.
• CHARACTERS : 9/10
I love the character of Nina. It's cute, especially in the prologue. All the other characters are also good and detailed.
• GRAMMAR : 15/15
No flaws. No error. It's just perfect. Very good work!
• COMMUNICATION : 3/5
Your interaction is good but a bit more opening up is needed.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I loved the book and it was very interesting. The above errors are the only one to keep in mind.
• TOTAL : 85/100
If any queries feel free to comment or PM me.
Thanks
Rishika
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