ᒪIᗷᖇᗩᖇY ᖇᗴᐯIᗴᗯՏ 2.0

🔖 I Would Change For You

Author : briannacannizzaro

Reviewer : Simasye_Maulidi

• COVER : 10/10

I find your cover sweet. The font is clear and playful. It already gives me an idea of what it's about! We all know the end but the journey is worth reading.

• TITLE : 10/10

Those are words you'd want to hear from anyone. I love the title. Without reading the blurb, I think it's about someone that has a rough time trusting people or doesn't believe something that good would be right in front of them.

• BLURB : 10/10

Oh my gosh! Excellent work on the blurb! This is definitely a must read for anyone. There is perfect characterization, enough information to let us know about the book and keep us on our toes. I love the pace and I can tell that Carrie has a lot of decisions to make.

• CREATIVITY : 6/10

It breaks my heart to give you this mark. I really like your writing. I didn't see a lot of descriptions, I had to imagine most of this, nevertheless I like how your characters are formed and they go in line with the story.

• PLOT : 15/15

I really love how you explain every part of Carrie's life. Her friends, family, and her life. This will help me and your readers included, to understand Carrie better. I don't really blame her. Life is rough and unfair.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

I really like your characters! Georgie is my favorite so far. I can't wait to see how everything unfolds.

• GRAMMAR : 14/15

I like your style of writing! I found no problem with your grammar or punctuation. Everything worked smoothing though I found a few slip ups but you pointed it out yourself how you need to edit it.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

Your communication with your readers is great! Keep it up!

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

I love everything to do with your book so far. Your characters, your writing style and flawless grammar! Keep up the good work and I assure you that your book is great! Don't give up!

• TOTAL : 94/100

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