🔖 Return Of The Dragons

40 1 0
                                    

Author : ASilentShadow15

Reviewer : Jesutofunmii


Reviewer : Jesutofunmii

Oops! This image does not follow our content guidelines. To continue publishing, please remove it or upload a different image.

COVER : 10/10

The cover is cool, it's great, it describes the book well, it's simple and beautiful.

TITLE : 10/10

The title is good. It describes the book well.

BLURB : 10/10

The blurb is perfect, you can tell it's going to be an interesting book just by reading the blurb and it's really an interesting book.

CREATIVITY : 10/10

One has to have a level of creativity before writing a book based on fantasy. The book is really unique and creative, you have outdone yourself. Very good!

PLOT : 15/15

I love the plot and I also love the fact that the characters also develop as the plot develops like Lucas for example, he starts to realise some things as the story goes by.

CHARACTER : 7/10

I love the way you presented the characters. I love the bravery and selflessness of Aella and the way she appreciates the little things around her like life and the sky and other little things people don't place significance upon, I love the way you make Lucas and Aella relationship work despite their difference. I just love Aella character in the book but it is lacking visual representation like the her height and the colour of her hair a little bit of visual representation would be good.

GRAMMAR : 15/15

The grammar is perfect! I couldn't find any error

COMMUNICATION : 5/5

All of the questions are answered.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

It's a really nice book, I love it! I love it!

TOTAL : 96/100

• TOTAL : 96/100

Oops! This image does not follow our content guidelines. To continue publishing, please remove it or upload a different image.
ᒪIᗷᖇᗩᖇY ᖇᗴᐯIᗴᗯՏ 2.0Where stories live. Discover now