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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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🌼COVER : 8/10
Your cover describes the main character well. But since it's an Harry Potter fanfic and is about Slytherin house, you can add some symbols that describes it as an Harry Potter fanfic. Such as Hogwarts badge or snake(it symbolizes Slytherin house). It can attract more HP fans.
🌼 TITLE : 10/10
There's no other title then this one, that can describe the story well.
🌼 BLURB : 8/10
Your blurb is a bit confusing but interesting as well.
🌼 CREATIVITY : 8/10
The concept of the story is really amazing. It's exactly like a dream of every Potterheads to get an Hogwarts acceptance latter. You story describes this feeling really well. It's creative.
🌼 PLOT : 13/15
There's not much plot. Pretty simple and fun to read. I really loved the ending of your book. It was such an unexpected twist and was funny and sad at the same time.
🌼 CHARACTERS :8/10
Needs more description about the characters.
🌼 GRAMMAR : 15/15
There's no grammatical errors. Good job. Keep it up👍
🌼 COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Replied every comment.
🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12.5/15
Your story is short and fun to read. Use line breaks between different scenes. It'll make the story look beautiful and it'll be more easy to understand every single scene.
🌼 TOTAL : 87.5/100
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