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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫COVER : 5/10
Your cover is nice but the cover didn't catch my attention that much. And the cover doesn't reflect your story. Your story is quite unique so, I suggest you to use something unique for your cover. And the author name on the cover, it's hard to read. You can change the font colors. It will be nice.
⚫ TITLE: 10/10
I love the title. Your book title is perfect for your story. Good job.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
I loved the blurb. It's successfully catch my attention. After reading the blurb, I was like yes, I want to read the story. I find your blurb really really interesting. You have done amazing job.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 10/10
You have done amazing job on creativity. The way you turn your story it's really amazing.
⚫ PLOT : 12/15
Your plots are nice. The way your story flow is good but you your story is too first. If you take some time in story it will good. There are some conversation which is confusing, you didn't mention who's talking. You have to improve this. Whenever you write conversation you have to mention who is talking.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 9/10
Your character is good and interesting but there is lack of information about character's. You didn't give much information about each characters.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 10/15
Your writing style is good. But there are some grammatical errors in your story. Try to improve your grammatical errors and try to use better vocabulary.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 1/5
There were so many comments in every chapter. But you didn't answer any of them. A good author interact with his / her readers. So, you need to improve this. Interact with your readers.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
Your story is unique and interesting. You have done a good job. But there are some errors I mentioned before. You need to correct your mistakes.
⚫ TOTAL : 79/100
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