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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
I am in love with the cover and it is unique, lovable, and eye-catching. A lot of people use pictures from the internet, but yours looks like a book that has been done by an editor with a great job with that.
• TITLE : 10/10
Just like with the cover the title is just as unique and refreshing something that would make people click on if they are looking for an amazing story to read.
• BLURB : 10/10
The blurb is amazing and very well done. It gives you a hint of what the amazing story is but it doesn't tell enough to ruin the story you tell with a blurb like yours to your reader come and read and find out if you want.
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
Your story is unique and very creative. I can tell you I have read a lot of stories and I have yet to find one like yours, which is amazing. Stories tend to have something similar to other's stories, which is not something easy to do. Great job!
• PLOT : 15/15
I love the plot. I haven't read a lot of Indian stories but I have read my few shares and usually they come with another language in between chapters with translations and same plot. Yours not only had English only, but the plot was different and I like that there was a gay character in the plot. I think there should be a lot more stories with gay characters. It would make them feel better and recognized.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
I only read five chapters, and they were one chapter for Rhea and one for Jeet's and it takes a lot for character development but for what I have seen it has been done nicely and steady I could read that it wasn't something out of the blue, that you thought and worked on them hard. Impressive job!
• GRAMMAR : 10/15
There were some minor grammar mistakes, and the description was ok. Nothing a good read over and edit won't fix. But an impressive job.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
You communicated with every comment and I could see a lot of relationship building with your readers never lose that.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
I was very impressed with your book and I found myself glad that I got to read such an amazing story. Keep on writing.
• TOTAL : 95/100
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