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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 8.5/10
The cover is absolutely beautiful. Though your story is related to the character being in dark, the cover tells that two people are together to keep each other positive even if everything is negative in their life. But it does not match a lot with the title! does it? Your title is damaged while the cover is something holding each other from falling apart. But yet you can let it be as in the story it might lead up to the characters holding each other from falling apart.
(Cover was changed later and reviewer had reviewed the book earlier. )
• TITLE : 9.5/10
It's perfect. It has everything it needs. Glimpse and match to your story, ability to attract. GOOD!
• BLURB : 9/10
It's good as well, Its lengthy enough, intro of characters, etc. no need to change anything.
• CREATIVITY : 9.5/10
I loved the strating. I am absolutely in love with Levi and Daisy's bond. and totally in love with cockroach (trouble) i mean it was great thinking and a word with H i don't remember. But I swear I spent 1 hour pronouncing and yet didn't get it right.
• PLOT : 14.5/15
AWESOME! it got me hooked so badly i didn't want to leave it. The arrogant ass tearing Daisy's picture was the best. It was damn emotional and it was quite a suspense to know what will happen and how will Daisy end up with that arrogant jerk.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
NO FLAWS. each and every part of the character was detailed and described so beautifully. I am falling in love with your book and your work.
• GRAMMAR : 14.5/15
And again good vocabulary, good choices of work. perfect tenses and all stuff and no mistakes.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Good work here also. You're perfect and polite with readers.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
Damn! i enjoyed it so much. Your book did its work of addiction in 1 chapter.. Literary.. Good job!
• TOTAL : 95.5/100
Feel free to PM me in any queries Thanks Rishika
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