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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 8/10
The cover is nice but, it's not fully relevant to the story. It's a story of skinny girl. You can use something more relevant to the storyline or the main character
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
Title is perfect for the story. I love the titel. It's absolutely perfect.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
Just like the title, I love the blurb. It's interesting as well as attractive. It's perfect for the story.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 10/10
The story was creative, it was inspirational and I loved it. Being skinny and being teased for that's really hurt. It happens in real life. And the way story turn out. I definitely loved it. Keep it up!
⚫ PLOT : 14/15
As I say before, Story was interesting and realistic. It was actually inspirational. Also nicely arranged.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 7/10
Characters in the story was really good. But, need more description.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 8/15
There were a lot of grammar issues. Which need to be correct. Author need to be focused on grammar. I didn't find any spelling mistake. Try to use better vocabularies.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Replied every comments.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I love the the story, it's realistic and inspirational. I really did enjoyed each plot. There were some errors, I mentioned earlier need be correct.
⚫ TOTAL : 85/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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