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🔖 Kenneth Chase: The Ace

Author : u-know-me-now

Reviewer : Aesthetically_Lazy

• COVER : 10/10

It is a simple cover but I love how it just screams 'look at me!' and it's really attractive. I think I would totally read the description after seeing this cover. The fonts are good too.

• TITLE : 10/10

Love the title. It is simple but catchy. It's not long either. I think it is a published novel-worthy title :D

• BLURB : 10/10

It's really good. I would totally read your book just by reading the blurb. There aren't many grammatical errors as such either and gives the right amount of information. Good job.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I really liked this story! Your aesthetics and everything was really good and it really pulled me in the story. There were a lot of creative aspects in the story and I loved that. I think this is story is really good and the plot is also pretty unique.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

Now I am just giving full marks for everything. But you constructed your characters really well, in my opinion! I could almost relate to a lot of characters which was really good. I don't know...I think you don't really need any help building your characters. Keep up the work and you'll be fine.

• PLOT : 14/15

I personally think that your plot was a little slow. I mean I read the first five chapters and it's just the same event in many different POVs. I believe that you could pace things up a bit and even though it is cool how you have started divided it in part 1 and part 2...I think you can just fit everything in the prologue. It's your choice. I mean I love this format of having split the story into two parts but I don't understand the concept of splitting the story into two parts when the first part was literally just one event being explained repeatedly. It's probably just me though. The good thing about this is that the way you wrote it was pretty attractive so the readers liked it a lot. I would suggest you work on the way of organizing the chapters and if you need help, you can always talk to me about it. I'm sorry if this sounds vague, I tried my best to explain it. But the plot was just a little unsettling to me and I think someone may have felt it too.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

I almost couldn't any grammar mistakes at all. Good job.

• COMMUNICATION : 4/5

You replied to almost all the comments but not quite all. So I know that you have a busy schedule but try to reply to all the comments. That's all really. Author's notes help too. They show how much you appreciate the readers actually enjoying the story.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

Honestly, the first time I read your story, I was a little overwhelmed. The cover was so attractive, and the chapter with the aesthetics in it was really good too. After reading the chapters, I was completely captivated in the story. I think this story has great potential. Good job!

• TOTAL : 97/100

Loved this story and I would probably keep reading it. Good job! If you have any questions, feel free to pm me :)