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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
The cover is fascinating. The roses covering the woman's eyes, and the slight opened lips are intriguing. The pink lips are a great touch. The font for the title and author's names are great. Wonderful cover.
• TITLE : 8/10
I've only read a few chapters, but I can't connect the title to the story right now. But maybe I will once I complete the book. I am sure it will make sense by the end of it.
• BLURB : 9.5/10
The blurb was catchy right off the bat. I liked it. And I like the style you wrote it in. Just capitalise Hana when you get around to editing, and it'll look really good. Other than that, I was hooked from the beginning.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
You have a really creative style in your writing and the storyline. I enjoyed the chapters I read so far, and it was very intriguing.
• PLOT : 14/15
The plot was great. I loved the beginning and the charcters in the book. You did really well with plot development as well.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
Seriously, all the characters were great. Not one character annoyed me or made me cringe. So the characters were portrayed nicely.
• GRAMMAR : 14/15
Very little mistakes I found, but they were not a big deal. You will be editing your book, and the book was readable as well as enjoyable. Great work thus far.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
You are very communicative with your readers, which was really impressive. Great job!
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
I enjoyed this story a lot. And I will complete. I'll let you know what I think by the time I finish it. Great writing and awesome work!
• TOTAL : 94.5/100
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