Author : Crystal_0808
Reviewer : wwenqing
🌼 COVER : 9/10Cover is really good. It gives a perfect little glimpse of the story.
🌼 TITLE : 10/10
Title is cleverly chosen. It's difficult to understand what the story is about just by reading the title. But, by reading through the book, I get that this title perfectly matches with the story and the plots.
🌼 BLURB : 10/10
Blurb is really amusing. It can easily seek attention of fantasy lovers.
🌼 CREATIVITY : 10/10
The creativeness of the story is unique. I didn't expect the story to be so good. It really amused me. I loved the way how everything turned out in the story.
🌼 PLOT : 13/15
Plots are engrossing but some scenes needed more description.
🌼 CHARACTERS : 8/10
I really like the characters. But it would've been better if you added a list of the characters and needs more development.
🌼 GRAMMAR : 12/15
There's lack of correct punctuation marks and capital letters in few places.
🌼 COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Replied every comment.
🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
Aside from some minor errors, your story is really good. It's well written and plots are well planned. Loved the story line and the uniqueness of it.
🌼 TOTAL : 90/100
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