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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 5/10
The cover is nice but, it wasn't unique or that much attractive. Also it's doesn't define the story fully. You can try something more similar with your story title.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
The title choosen cleverly. The title perfectly suits with the story.
⚫ BLURB : 8/10
The blurb was quite interesting. But, it can't hold the readers attraction that much. By reading the blurb, it can't be found that, your story is really nice more then the blurb.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 6/10
Your story was good. But I didn't find that much creativity in your story. The plots and the characters you showed in story.
⚫ PLOT : 10/15
Your plot's were really good. But, I feel it goes a bit fast. It will be great, if you take some time for your each plot. Don't rush over it. Take your time.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 6/10
Well arranged character's but you didn't give much information. It's was little bit difficult to understand each character s. If you add a character update, which contains all information about story characters. It will be good.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 12.5/15
I found some tiny errors in the story. Try to use better vocabulary. And be careful with the Spelling's and grammar.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 5/5
I love the way you communicated your reader's. Good job.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 10/15
Story was amazing. There were some tiny mistakes I mention earlier, need to improve.
⚫ TOTAL : 72.5/100
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