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🔖 Poetry

Author : ilovetodrawalot

Reviewer : more-like-reyna

• COVER : 5/10

I love the cover but it doesn't exactly match the current title. I would advise you to choose something more fitting to the title (preferably something aesthetic) as poetry contains multitudes that I don't think are present in the current cover. Also, try increasing the size of your username and making it a bit darker.

• TITLE : 4/10

The title, I feel, is generic because it doesn't call attention to itself. I would advise adding another word or two in front like Pondering and Pain||Poetry {taken from your blurb}

• BLURB : 6/10

I like the blurb but it could be better and more eye catching. Maybe you could add a quote or snippet of a poem to make it more attractive and interesting to the reader.

• FIRST POEM : 9/10

Your first poem is great. It sets the tone for the book, how it's about overcoming your pain and standing victorious. The flow is jarring once or twice but apart from that, its pretty good.

• MESSAGE : 7/10

I like the message you present in the poem but I feel like you have more potential. The first poem sets one tone whereas the next 3 set a different one and the last one resembles the first poem again. It feels harried and the message may get muddled if the readers aren't paying too much attention.

• GRAMMAR : 7/10

I think your spelling is good but the grammar in many parts is a bit off. Mostly with commas, question marks and conjunctions. These are again very prominent in the poems "You" and "Your Love" so go through those once again.

• CREATIVITY : 7/10

I enjoyed the poems a lot but "You" and "Your Love" seemed a bit generic to me. You could make them better by adding in slightly more complex words to make it stand out.

• STYLE/FLOW : 8/10

Despite not having an exact rhyme scheme, I liked the flow of the whole thing. It was pretty good except for one or two parts where it faltered but they can be overlooked.

• READER INVOLVEMENT : 5/5

Yes, the book makes me want to continue reading and I could relate to the poems a lot. The author has conveyed their emotions pretty well. "You" was the most relatable for me and made me tear up a bit.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

Yes, you communicate with the readers very well and seem to respond to their comments and engage them, which is really great.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 8/10

Overall, I think it was a really good book that has a lot of potential. Just needs a bit more changes on the externals but the content is pretty great. Good job.

• TOTAL : 71/100