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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
The cover is really matches the story.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title fits too. I don't really have much to say except that it was well portrayed.
• BLURB : 10/10
The blurb this time was precise and straight to the point. It helped bring out the whole story and was hooking enough to grab the reader right off the bat.
• Creativity : 10/10
Just like the previous story, the creativity was there and I even found this more intriguing than the last.
• PLOT : 13/15
The plot was well expressed.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
Even with the minimal use of dialogue, I liked the way you brought out the characters, making the reader sympathize with them.
• GRAMMAR : 9/15
I mentioned the same issue with your grammar in the other review of your work. But one thing that stands out that I want to correct is this; "Yes your Majesty." It is meant to be written as "Yes, Your Majesty." And not the other way round. The same way you wouldn't write "Miss or Mr" as "miss/mr" It is a form of addressing someone, so it should be in capital. In the above, you also failed to include your comma. The same applies to the examples below; His Majesty Her Majesty
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I loved the way the story flowed, but it was especially the narration that had my whole attention. It was well told.
• TOTAL : 90/100
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