Author : EllaBabe94
Reviewer : constadd
• COVER : 7/10
Your cover is nice looking but it wasn't catchy. Too much overlapping of pictures. Maybe youcan try going with one picture that can define the meaning of whole book or align the pictures in such manner that the graphics are quite clear.
• TITLE : 6/10
Sorry, the title is too common. I have read many books of the same title. Yet at certain point I can see your title being relatable with the plot.
• BLURB : 7/10
Your blurb exactly isn't bad. But too upfront. I wish you could give small information about both the character and little sneak peak of how things happened. It might intrigued the readers.
• CREATIVITY : 8/10
The story was quite creative. It was well written.
• PLOT : 12/15
Plot was fantastic. But it was cliché too. I could guess what would happen in the next chapter. Maybe you could create little interest and excitement among readers that what would happen next. Like a cliffhanger. The story was moving too fast. Little more expressive words could help.chapter titles were great and innovative. Overall I liked it.
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
Main characters played their role very well. Their wasn't any confusion regarding characters. Supporting characters played their role great but small description about them was required.
• GRAMMAR : 11/15
I found few grammatical mistakes not much. You can edit them later.
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
Author very well communicated with the readers. Only few were left unanswered.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
I liked your book! It was simple and cute. If the book wasn't too fast and upfront it would have been totally astonishing.
• TOTAL : 75/100
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