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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 7/10
The cover is beautiful. But, the fonts can be change. It's little difficult to understand written book name on cover also author's name also can add on cover.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
Book title is perfectly fit with the story.
⚫ BLURB : 8/10
The blurb is interesting. But, I will suggest you to write something with more suspense. Write something that will make a few questions in readers mind, which will make jump to your story directly.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 8/10
Concept of the story is unique. But, it's not well described.
⚫ PLOT : 11/15
As I said, Story concept is unique but, I didn't feel it's well described. I will suggest the author, describe every scenarios more. I didn't feel connected with the story. Don't rush with your plots. Take your time.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 8/10
All characters need more description.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 13/15
There are some grammatical mistakes which need improvement.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 1/5
Author didn't replied in all comments. Try to reply in all comments. If author give a reply of readers comments. They feel happy and connected.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15
Story was nice. I enjoyed reading the story. But, as I say before, I didn't feel connected with the story because of less description. So, I will suggest you to add some more description in each scenarios and add some emotions. Also characters information need.
⚫ TOTAL : 77/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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