🔖 Through The Mist

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Author : Hellion42

Reviewer : basicallycatto

Reviewer : basicallycatto

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COVER : 8/10

Loved the cover, it kinda matched with the story. I'd have rated this 10 out 10 but the cover would look amazing if it looked a little spooky or funky.

TITLE : 9/10

Totally goes with the story, because it all started in the mist.

BLURB : 8.5/10

The blurb matches with story as well, but not quiet attention grabbing. So please write it more interestingly, this book deserves more attention.

CREATIVITY : 9/10

TOTALLY AMAZING, the story is more like comedy horror, it was quiet suspenseful yet hella funny. Loved the words you chose.

PLOT : 13/15

The story has an uncommon storyline, it contains mature themes, but not so disturbing, also has a few slangs but that's fine. But it only has 3 chapters, u would request the author to update the story regularly. Nowhere close to cliche.

CHARACTERS : 8.5/10

The story doesn't have a lot of characters. It only has a few characters, including the main character, she is a total badass. But the goddesses' names were pretty hard to spell.

GRAMMAR : 9/10

As i said, the book has an amazing word collection, i barely could find a mistake. But i did found a little errors but that's fine.

COMMUNICATION : 4/5

The book is pretty new, comments were less but the author replies to everyone.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

I really loved it, the author started the book with a few quotes that i found great. But as i said it has only 3 chapters. More chapters would be nice. Keep going honey!

TOTAL : 82/100

• TOTAL : 82/100

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