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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 8/10
The cover was okay, it just kinda look like a little bit over the top with the fonts but the background was aesthetically pleasing, the only downside was the people in the back. Instead of girls, all the people were boys which kind of contradicted the characters.
• TITLE : 9/10
Title was simple and explained the whole concept of the story.
• BLURB : 7/10
The blurb was long and a little bit unnecessary. I know you want to put some excerpts from the story itself but it kind of gave the impression that it was from a chapter already.
• CREATIVITY : 8/10
The creativity was okay. I liked the trailer that you created. It was like a clip from a tv series.
• PLOT : 12/15
The plot was a little bit common but I love how you make the connection between each characters. Also the plot is realistic which really tackles the common trails that a teenager faces today.
• CHARACTERS : 7/10
The character's portrayal and characteristics are typical and really reflects the whole story. But I just feel that they should have more than meets the eye.
• GRAMMAR : 13/15
The grammar was good, other than a few misspell and sometimes lacking of capitalisation in the start of a sentence. Just be mindful also in using punctuation marks since some missed a few.
• COMMUNICATION : 3/5
Fairly replies with the readers but there are also some comments which are left unanswered. Although some also of those comments are emojis.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
It really gives off the teen fiction that it is. I would recommend this if you're into teen fiction because it totally markets that area.
• TOTAL : 80/100
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