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🔖 Spider - Venom

Author : SumitJena2099

Reviewer : Aesthetically_Lazy

Before we begin, I would like to say that I don't have a large amount of knowledge about marvel and the avengers so if I say anything wrong in here, I apologize.

• TITLE : 10/10

It's a nice title and I got a little idea of why you chose it in the blurb so that's good. Good job.

• COVER : 10/10

I love the cover! Honestly, all the graphics in this book are amazing including the banners in your chapters. Good job again!

• BLURB : 8/10

Your blurb was really long. It had all the right information but I didn't like the way you presented it. By the end, I was kinda bored of reading it. If you put another space between paragraphs and make it somewhat more cleaner, then I believe it would look good. Other than that, it is perfect.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

Again, like I said that I am not the biggest marvel fan out there so I don't have a huge knowledge of it, but I loved the idea. I have seen both the movies- Venom and Spider-Man far from home, so you merging the two stories was really cool. And I liked how even though the two stories are different (sorry if I am wrong), you made it fit together and made sense of it. So good job!

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

I think the way your character descriptions were quite accurate. I liked how accurately you wrote about Venom (I saw the movie again just to check), and everything was good.

• PLOT : 13/15

Loved the plot. But at some places, you just rushed through the scene, and me, as an uneducated marvel fan-fiction reader had no clue what happened. I will give you an example.
In chapter three when a fight broke out in front of the Pentagon, it seemed a little rushed to me. Honestly, I didn't get it at all at the starting. You slowly made it clearer which is good. So I have two questions, was it supposed to be like that? Did you want your readers to be clueless in the beginning? If you didn't want that, make it a little clearer. Describe the scene. And don't rush it. Other than this, I think your plot was great.

• GRAMMAR : 10/15

You have multiple grammar errors. Let's start with the tenses. You change your tenses around a lot. For example in one of the scenes, you were writing in the past tense and in the next scene you suddenly changed to the present tense and this happened a lot. It happened in almost every chapter. Also, your punctuation marks and comma placements kinda bothered me. Like you placed commas in places where it wasn't needed or forgot to place them in the places where it was to be used. You can correct all this while editing though.

• COMMUNICATION : 4/5

You did reply to the readers but not all of them. That's understandable because you do have a lot of comments. Try to reply to as many as you can though.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

The cover attracted me the most. The description...not so much. I won't say your description totally sucks because it really doesn't. But it's a mess. Make it a little less messy. Everything else was pretty good. And your story was kinda addictive. I almost didn't notice that I had finished the fifth chapter and when I did, I wanted to read more. This is a good story and I think it had potential.

• TOTAL : 88/100

I apologize if I said anything wrong about the avengers. It's mainly because of my lack of knowledge in that area. I hope this review helped. You can always pm me if you have any queries. Stay safe!