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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
The cover is splendid. Perfect. The fonts and title are great styles. And the girl picked out is perfect for a horror story. Well done.
• TITLE : 10/10
Great title for the story. It fits it perfectly. And it is mysterious in many ways.
• BLURB : 9/10
The blurb itself is great. I love the blurb and the details you gave. The only issues in it were some minor punctuation mistakes, and maybe a missing word? I'm not sure.
What they don't is this evil... What they don't, what? Don't know? Don't realise? Other than a few mistakes, I loved how engaging the whole synopsis is. I was ready to read it immediately.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
I really liked your creativity in your story. Some of the lines really had me. And one line from Chapter One connected to me immediately, considering I am a mother.
There's nothing like seeing your child's face light up when she looks at you.
That line had my heart. And the line after that was beautifully described. I loved how well you captured the essence of the analogies and metaphors used.
Other than the lines, your creativity in this story is overwhelming. I am very intrigued and will continue reading each part that you update. Amazing work.
• PLOT : 15/15
From the moment I read the fantastic blurb, I knew this would be a great story. Your plot is amazing. The storyline is very intriguing. I loved it, honestly.
• CHARACTERS : 9.5/10
I liked your characters and definitely the main ones. There are some great qualities in all of them that kept me invested in this story. Great work.
• GRAMMAR : 12/15
There were very few problems regarding punctuation and grammar. Not too bad, but some commas and periods were placed where it shouldn't have been. But the story was readable and flowed well. So good job on that.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
You are great with communication. You've answered questions and comments, and you also had author's notes. I loved the added word count as well.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
Completely impressed with this compelling and intriguing story. Well done!
• TOTAL : 94.5/100
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