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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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⚫ COVER : 10/10
Book cover is really nice and beautiful. I love it.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
Book title perfectly goes with the stroy. Author did a good job in choosing book title.
⚫ BLURB : 5/10
I'm sorry to say but the blurb can't make jump readers to the story. Rather it can't attract readers. Your story is more interesting then the blurb. I will suggest you change the blurb and try to make the blurb interesting which make few questions in readers mind ,that will help you to attract all readers.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 8/10
Story wad quite unique. Also all plots have suspense which I found very interesting and creative.
⚫ PLOT : 11/15
Story plot is amazing. It was pretty well arranged. But, there were some scenarios which need more description for feel more connected with the story. You can add some emotions in your story. it was quite straight. Example : When Andrew got know Maddison is dead. You can add some emotions of Andrew about what was his feeling when he hear his wife is dead. He was sad? Happy? Or what? Also in 2nd chapter you just shift in Veronica's house. If you mentioned it on top of the chapter that **Veronica's place**. It would be more understandable. I will suggest you if you shift one place to another do mention that.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 8/10
Characters was interesting. You also add a cast list which is very good. But, in cast list you just mentioned their name you didn't mention their personality or what they do? Who are they?. I will suggest you add some short description about each characters in your cst list. It will be nice.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 15/15
I didn't found any grammatical mistakes or any kind of errors.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Replied in all comments.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
I really enjoyed reading the story. Story was really good. There were some errors, I mentioned earlier need to be improve . Otherwise, the story was really interesting and nice. Good Job author.
⚫ TOTAL : 85/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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