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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 7/10
I don't like the cover much. I can't find any link between the cover and title. It's a bit disappointing for me.
• TITLE : 8.5/10
The title is nice and matches the plot well but if you want you can even change the title for a better one.
• BLURB : 8.5/10
The blurb is one of the main thing that attracts a reader therefore it needs to be written skillfully,and you did an amazing job in building up the blurb. The only thing that's wrong is the quote that you've used- "Hate the sin,love the sinner"-Gandhi not Gadhi.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
When I started reading the book,I thought that it's going to be a normal book but you proved me wrong. I've never read a book like this and it's definitely one of it's own. I am truly amazed by the concept of a fallen angel.
• PLOT : 13.5/15
Vasco is the son of a fallen angel who lives in Earth in exchange to be the agent of hell. His life was very sad as he lived most of his life alone. He meets Mallory who too is a rebel like him. I've never read a gay love story and this is my first. Trust me I don't regret reading this. You're definitely a master of plot. You described the scenes and emotions so beautifully that I was able to visualize it. I'm amazed I must say.
• CHARACTERS : 9/10
The characters were beautifully and amazingly described that I could literally feel Vasco's pain and misery. Even though the characters were perfectly described,I feel Mallory's character was a bit inexpensive.
• GRAMMAR : 14/15
You definitely have a good grammar skill and I've no complaints regarding it.
• COMMUNICATION : 1.5/5
You have replied to a very few comments.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13.5/15
Except for the cover,I loved everything about the book. The storyline was exceptional and you made the plot stand out. You've done a good job at penning down such a superb story in an interesting manner.
• TOTAL : 84.5/100
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